sonnet no. xlviii, 2
Interesting to get more background on your series. I like the rework, although I loved the line "A calm cool voice, like grating nutmeg, in my mind."
When I took it out, I thought, “Arjan will be disappointed.” Don’t worry, it will reappear.
The first Volta had too much of that calm cool voice, which is a ghost not meant for this crown. He’ll appear, but briefly.
Never disappointed, my poet friend. Just love being a witness to the process in this way.
Yes... amazing to see the workings. And the poems. They must be savoured. Slowly.
Thank you.
Interesting to get more background on your series. I like the rework, although I loved the line "A calm cool voice, like grating nutmeg, in my mind."
When I took it out, I thought, “Arjan will be disappointed.” Don’t worry, it will reappear.
The first Volta had too much of that calm cool voice, which is a ghost not meant for this crown. He’ll appear, but briefly.
Never disappointed, my poet friend. Just love being a witness to the process in this way.
Yes... amazing to see the workings. And the poems. They must be savoured. Slowly.
Thank you.